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DvL 1100 by GreyHues DvL 1100 by GreyHues
Illustration for mobile card game "Leap of Faith"

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ArcaneUnit Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014
Tell deVan I want my Imaginations back. It looks to good on him.

this design was strictly written for leap of faith situations.
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Tybertimus Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'm gonna be a little nit-picky, because overall I really like the piece :)

He seems a bit too centered left to right. Then again, this is for a mobile card game, so perhaps there's a reason I don't know about that you wanted him where he is; however my mind keeps wanting him to be shifted to the right to bring his eyes to that 1/3, and the weapon moved out away from him just a tad to get close to that other 1/3 (and more contrast in that metal as well! Weapons often want the attention.)

Take this with a grain of salt, I'm no professional yet. Just throwing in my two cents. Also that's why I didn't put it under "critiques."
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GreyHues Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thx for your time and constructive critique!! Appreciate it alot) 
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